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Time by ~kezbez22:iconkezbez22:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Time is of an essence which I cannot tell
It is only foretold by the ringing of a bell

Time can’t be seen by the natural eye
It is something we learn to manage when we die

Time goes by and there’s nothing we can do
To stop it passing over me and you

Time can only be controlled by the one up high
It doesn’t even stop during the nigh

Time can go fast and it can go slow
We cannot determine at the rate it will go
©2006-2009 ~kezbez22
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Author's Comments

This is weird cos i am weird and i'm in a weird mood...:P

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~seiv15 Oct 8, 2006, 10:23:31 AM
tis cool

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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~kezbez22 Oct 8, 2006, 10:57:56 AM
hehe thanks :) twas me being random! :D

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Dark Princess
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~seiv15 Oct 8, 2006, 11:14:32 AM
thats ok

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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~Aki-at Oct 8, 2006, 7:00:00 PM
I really love your work, have the right music playing and it can really touch you and make you think, and this one is another great piece. You really should try making it into those poems we had to learn in school! I would have loved to be reading poems like these when I was in secondary school!
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~kezbez22 Oct 9, 2006, 9:19:16 AM
hehe, you would?! :P we always did poems about boring stuff like wars and all depressing stuff, me not likey those poems, hehe. (I'm hyper today, can't stop singing! help meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee) hehe, sorry

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Dark Princess
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~Aki-at Oct 9, 2006, 10:32:59 AM
Nah you carry on singing!

And yes, the schools only give depressing stuff, like my friends A level courses all set around The Brontes, a bunch of poem about the death of family members and death in general and me being the happy chappy I am I know I won't enjoy those books XD but neither do any of my friends!
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